Single metaphor

SCHOOL
shool is jail
licking you up with homework
on the weekend


Shopping
shopping is heaven
walking out the door full of shopping bags

5 comments:

Steph Gartea said...

Coolies XD
Did you mean carshing meteors or crashing meteors?

Madeleine's Visual Diary said...

crashig!!!!

Holly's visual diary said...

That is an excellent poem - I so agree with you as to me school is exactly like a jail-
hugs,
holly :0)

Madeleine's Visual Diary said...

THX MAte your poems are kool too!!!

Lorrie!! said...

Lainey,
I don't think that school is jail!

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