Short Story introdction
'Dad?', I whispered trying not to wake up the peaceful soul lying next to him, 'dad wake up.' He didn't. Maybe he was just... tired i thought to myself. I shook him again but he didn't move. Silent tears ran down my soft cheek as i realiased what happened. I was only 5 when my dad died. I still have memories of the ambulance sirens. Sometimes i even wake up thinking i am still in the hospital bed next to my dad. It was a grave loss.
what we have learned in a short story
-It has a special structure:
orientation
complications
climax
resolution
-A story only has a few characters including a main character
-it is concerned with on event in the main characters life
-write in third person
-avoid long introductions
- Jump right into the stroy
- puncuate correctly
- use verbs wisely
- use words to describe the character's relation s to the events in the stroy
orientation
complications
climax
resolution
-A story only has a few characters including a main character
-it is concerned with on event in the main characters life
-write in third person
-avoid long introductions
- Jump right into the stroy
- puncuate correctly
- use verbs wisely
- use words to describe the character's relation s to the events in the stroy
Descriptive paragraph
Charlotte walked through the ruins of her home town dodging all of the dead bodies. She recognised one of them, it was the mail boy, the one she was deeply in love. A tear rolled down her cheek. His pale cheeks were ice cold as she ran her finger through his hair, it was full of dired bits of mud. She shook his body to she if he was still alive, she checked his pulse, but there was nothing. Why would nature do such a devastating thing, especially something she loved.She fell to the muddy ground knowing she was the only one alive. 'Why?' she screamed, 'Why?'.
notes about story characers
Notes about characters-
Charlottes mums name is: Sandra Sellery
Her fathur died from cancer
Charlottles personality- shy, happy, positive, adventurous
Charlottes mums name is: Sandra Sellery
Her fathur died from cancer
Charlottles personality- shy, happy, positive, adventurous
The dangerous game
Heya,
Well, this term we are studying short stories and the first one we read was caled the dangerous game. It was about a younng man called Reinsford and he was a hunter. He arrived with out any notice and was caught up in his thoughts, 'this island is haunted'. If you want to know more read the stroy at: http://fiction.eserver.org/short/the_most_dangerous_game.html
I hope you enjoy the story :D
Lainey
Well, this term we are studying short stories and the first one we read was caled the dangerous game. It was about a younng man called Reinsford and he was a hunter. He arrived with out any notice and was caught up in his thoughts, 'this island is haunted'. If you want to know more read the stroy at: http://fiction.eserver.org/short/the_most_dangerous_game.html
I hope you enjoy the story :D
Lainey
MY reading book 'the killing'
Hello all,
At the moment i am reading a novel called 'the killing' written by Robert Muchamore and it is in the cherub series. The cherub series is about an undercover agency which involves kids aged between 8-18 who have no parents. As I said before Cherub is an undercover agency, so you can't just enroll in this accademy, some cherub kids go to foster homes in mission to find more students for the school because kids in foster homes have no parent. The book I am reading is as i said 'the killing' and i am not very syre what it is really about because i just started reading it, it is number 4 in the cherub series.
Thank-you for reading my blog..... Lainey :D
At the moment i am reading a novel called 'the killing' written by Robert Muchamore and it is in the cherub series. The cherub series is about an undercover agency which involves kids aged between 8-18 who have no parents. As I said before Cherub is an undercover agency, so you can't just enroll in this accademy, some cherub kids go to foster homes in mission to find more students for the school because kids in foster homes have no parent. The book I am reading is as i said 'the killing' and i am not very syre what it is really about because i just started reading it, it is number 4 in the cherub series.
Thank-you for reading my blog..... Lainey :D
poemmm
SOAP
Saop going through your fingers are slippery pliffery bubbles coming out. SLimeym, quilmey while the water runs about. Bubbly fubbly subbly tumbling down ther sink
RAINBOW
Lovely sovely movely shining like a star. Colourful molourful just like a car. Glisteing flistening in a pot. Gold golsd pold wolm imaginary alot
Saop going through your fingers are slippery pliffery bubbles coming out. SLimeym, quilmey while the water runs about. Bubbly fubbly subbly tumbling down ther sink
RAINBOW
Lovely sovely movely shining like a star. Colourful molourful just like a car. Glisteing flistening in a pot. Gold golsd pold wolm imaginary alot